memories are not made, when you stand at the
same place where you fell,
where your heart broke,
where you spilled tears,
where you lost someone.
it is when you move from there and reach the destination called success
and turn back to see the place where you fell.....
really sweet memories da....
ReplyDeleteAn emotinal title and a ratinal content. Rare combinations seldomn work and it does work here. Good one....
ReplyDeletejust a little miss between words n sync..ur thought are far too high..its just the miss of juxtaposing..try to follow a meter then I think u ll make it far more standardised..contents r unimaginable..raw yet sutle...they r more refined even in its rawness..esp in plastic plants..the final verse..was way too good.
ReplyDeleteto compare with how u started (2007 n now) there is much of improvement..u yourself has confinded to a meter its just the fine tuning..
all the best vimal..